The God Stone

Ch.1 p.41: The hair cut

June 4th, 2013, 8:40 am
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TheGreenOne June 4th, 2013, 10:06 am
Yay misterious wolves stealing people's hair for unknown reasons, the plot is thickening...
Evildragonqueen June 4th, 2013, 3:49 pm
@TheGreenOne: About time! Ammirite?
TheGreenOne June 4th, 2013, 4:57 pm
@Evildragonqueen: Well, until now I guss it's been mainly focusing in set up the world and stuff, the rivalry between the clans, the power of the stones and the dangers of the world outside the walls of a town...

I guess now that the history has been set, we can see some cool magic and/or some action ;)
Evildragonqueen June 5th, 2013, 4:06 am
@TheGreenOne: That is true, I was hoping to achieve a balance of captivating the reader's interest, whilst setting up the history of the world easily enough to follow. I have planned to actually reveal the reasons for their travels and the main thread of the plot by the end of the chapter. Thanks for following :)
ranasan June 19th, 2013, 12:38 am
He's obviously stealing hair for his love shrine for Steel!
Evildragonqueen July 3rd, 2013, 8:24 am
@ranasan: We've all had the urges to create a love shrine to Steel, I'm sure. The trick is learning how to manage these urges and keep them under control. Difficult, I know.
Indagold July 11th, 2013, 7:33 pm
Oh dear, I'm guessing he's stealing it for some evil dark spell.
Evildragonqueen July 16th, 2013, 5:07 am
@Indagold: I suppose it would depend on your definition of an evil or dark spirit.