The God Stone

Ch.1 p.53: go go go!

October 3rd, 2013, 3:47 pm
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TheGreenOne October 4th, 2013, 12:26 pm
Hmmm... Wouldt it be easier to get like 10 men to fix the wall ASAP than taking everyone out of the village in panic?
I mean, dude, what on earth can be so freakin terrifing?

BTW: Yay wolfie is back, I guess it's wolf senses felt some bad haircuts on town and it's going to fix that.
Evildragonqueen October 5th, 2013, 4:54 am
@TheGreenOne: It would be easier to fix the wall, you're right. That would take more time than they have. Some history that I have yet to tell is that most able bodied men were taken to fight in the Eastern war. There's only really very young, very old or women left.
It is also more complicated to fix a wall breach. To protect against what is now coming for them, they not only have to re-erect the wall, but reconnect the circuit that runs through it. As Mehill is so close to Akeru city, the best thing to do is flee for now. Other villages may not have that option, and would have to frantically repair a breach (if they can in time).

TL;DR: Takes too long to fix wall.
TheGreenOne October 6th, 2013, 1:25 pm
@Evildragonqueen: Sounds good to me, It's awesome yo have the writer answering all the questions I come up with in every page hahaha
Evildragonqueen October 6th, 2013, 3:02 pm
@TheGreenOne: No worries :) In all seriousness I tale feedback really seriously. If there's something I haven't got across on the pages its good to know that kind of thing, apart from if its just world based, that I'll either be explaining in later pages or when I write 'world history' for the thing. Happy to answer any questions and take on any tips too.
ranasan October 7th, 2013, 9:48 pm
Steel! You fool! You're forgetting Taylin! GET BACK THERE AND BRING THE STUPID OVERLY EXCITED GIRL WITH YOU! I'm sure she and Brynook would get along perfectly!
Evildragonqueen October 8th, 2013, 3:38 pm
@ranasan: I think Bryn would enjoy a nice busty girlfriend; would probably be frustrated with how stupid she is.
ranasan October 9th, 2013, 9:39 am
@Evildragonqueen: But they have so much in common,like how they annoy Steel to no end!